This seems like a good start to a book, but it is far too short to really consider a book or novella. I’d like to see the expanded story outside this short story. The Narrator did a good job making each character sound unique.
For such a short story, it had a lot of characters. I would have liked it if it stuck with one of the pairs of people, since nothing seems to actually happen to end the story. At most, this was the first two chapters of what should have been a full-length novel.
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